Was moved by the way the guy could pen down these feelings...
Please someone tell me when
This pain will go away
When I'll forget the past
And move on to another day
A day where just for once
You face won't cross my mind
I won't think of our memories
I'll just leave them all behind
I say all this right now
Wishing it would be true
But I know tonight, Ill go to bed,
Crying over you....
Friday, September 26, 2008
A sad poem....
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ReplyDeletemohit said...
Well, Yesterday I tried my hands on English Poetry and for all my travails now I can really understand charm of these words :-)
9:17 AM
I believe the only good thing about pain is that it brings the poet inside you out..and the only bad thing is the price you have to pay for this pain :P.
ReplyDeleteAnother good way to be a poet is -to fall in love ,but again , it comes with a price.
~Deeksha
Its not only pain...I have written when I was quite happy :) but ya mostly the urge is strong when you are sad...Koi na will try and change that, although the present one I am writting is somewhat on same genre but at the same time a happy one when not in love is on its way too:)
ReplyDeletethe poem is b'ful.....i donno ..it might sound crazy....but i think u can write anything of any genre anytime...there is enough sadness concealed even when i m happy and enough happiness when i m sad....all u need to do is strike the chord inside u ....and let the words flow i guess :P....it might sound crazy from someone who is not even an amateur in the world of "WRITING"
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