Friday, February 13, 2009

Please let me cry...

An impulsive poem but I think the best I have written so far :)

I was running fast, could not see it coming,
I fell down, got a cut and it started bleeding,
Please don't come near,Please don't let it heal,
Let me feel the pain, Please let me cry...

I was never in Love before, I never had a start,
You did not break my heart but it still did hurt,
Please don't put a hand around me, please don't console,
Let me feel the pain, Please let me cry...

I never felt the urge to speak, never had the desire of telling,
Something within me is driving , something within me is compelling
Please let me shout, please don't stop me from yelling,
Let me feel the pain, Please let me cry...

I have never failed before, I never went down,
No..No I am not stopping, I still have the urge to go on
Please let me pause , please let me take a breath,
Let me feel the pain, Please let me cry...

11 comments:

  1. its awesome dear.
    really unbeleivable.

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  2. hmmm..this is some serious good stuff :)....keep writing :)

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  3. good one jana...tu to professional hota ja rha h yar..mast rhyme n i can understand the profound meaning attached to it...

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  4. Thanks Amit..it feels good when people comment

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  5. Thanks Siddhartha for your comment too..

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  6. It's a very nice one... I can understand the real hidden meaning... Keep posting

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  7. its great boss...
    really good...

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  8. Nicely written ...... Short and sweet .....seems u put ur feelings in it

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  9. Thanks Santa and Keshav for your comments

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