An impulsive poem but I think the best I have written so far :)
I was running fast, could not see it coming,
I fell down, got a cut and it started bleeding,
Please don't come near,Please don't let it heal,
Let me feel the pain, Please let me cry...
I was never in Love before, I never had a start,
You did not break my heart but it still did hurt,
Please don't put a hand around me, please don't console,
Let me feel the pain, Please let me cry...
I never felt the urge to speak, never had the desire of telling,
Something within me is driving , something within me is compelling
Please let me shout, please don't stop me from yelling,
Let me feel the pain, Please let me cry...
I have never failed before, I never went down,
No..No I am not stopping, I still have the urge to go on
Please let me pause , please let me take a breath,
Let me feel the pain, Please let me cry...
I was running fast, could not see it coming,
I fell down, got a cut and it started bleeding,
Please don't come near,Please don't let it heal,
Let me feel the pain, Please let me cry...
I was never in Love before, I never had a start,
You did not break my heart but it still did hurt,
Please don't put a hand around me, please don't console,
Let me feel the pain, Please let me cry...
I never felt the urge to speak, never had the desire of telling,
Something within me is driving , something within me is compelling
Please let me shout, please don't stop me from yelling,
Let me feel the pain, Please let me cry...
I have never failed before, I never went down,
No..No I am not stopping, I still have the urge to go on
Please let me pause , please let me take a breath,
Let me feel the pain, Please let me cry...
its awesome dear.
ReplyDeletereally unbeleivable.
Thanks dear :) :) :)
ReplyDeletehmmm..this is some serious good stuff :)....keep writing :)
ReplyDeletegood one jana...tu to professional hota ja rha h yar..mast rhyme n i can understand the profound meaning attached to it...
ReplyDeleteThanks Amit..it feels good when people comment
ReplyDeleteThanks Siddhartha for your comment too..
ReplyDeleteIt's a very nice one... I can understand the real hidden meaning... Keep posting
ReplyDeleteThanks ila.
ReplyDeleteits great boss...
ReplyDeletereally good...
Nicely written ...... Short and sweet .....seems u put ur feelings in it
ReplyDeleteThanks Santa and Keshav for your comments
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